Monday, March 25, 2013

alternate ending.(last post)


Torvald and Nora get into an argument about her departure. The fight gets physical as Torvald snaps and grabs Nora’s arm and slaps her face repeatedly.
He then says while slapping her “why…” smack “aren’t…” smack “you…” smack “listening…” smack “to…” smack “me!” now this last slap was so hard they heard it all the way down Ernest Hemingway’s house, the smack has left a hand mark on Nora’s face only known by Ike turner.
Nora then gets up and shouts “hellll naww! Mama bout to fade!” and then proceeds to take 20 minutes to take off her heavy jewelry, putting her hair in a bun, patting down her ‘cheap’ weave, and tells Ms. Linde to hold her ‘earrangs’. She then talks smack for about 30 more minutes, then never steps up to fight Helmer.
Ms. Linde gets mad at Nora and throws her earrings at the ground and starts stomping while saying “you ain’t gon’ do nothin.” Her stomping turns into twerking as she repeats “you ain’t gon’ do nothin!” She sees this, scoffs, an then says “at least I got a husband to twerk fo’!”
As she says this the entire cast of Wild N’ Out come out of nowhere and say “ohhhhh!!!danggg son. She wilin’.” This then continues to a whole debacle of a ‘stack session’ if you will.
 Suddenly after the ‘stack session’, there’s music in the background. It’s sounds like electronics and with a very loud bass. Suddenly they’re hearing “Con los terroristas!” and a man dancing out of nowhere. They start staring out of sheer confusion. And as soon as the bass drops, everything just goes crazy, there’s superheroes there and a several guys in different animal suits dougieing a dog doing flips, Betty White doing cartwheels and other crazy things.
And then a loud noise came out of nowhere, she opened her eyes and took a long at her surroundings. It turns out that she’s been in a coma for years and is in the hospital. It turns out that she’s been living in a Limbo like state and the only way out is to hear the Harlem shake song. Her whole life has been based around the lie that she’s married and has kids, even though her life is nothing like that. Her two kids died at birth and she treats two dolls like her kids to cope with the fact that she never have had any kids.  Her father has been ever since she was a little girl neglected her and died from working too much and not handing the stress, which explains how she wanted to save Torvald from the same fate and so she can get some attention. Torvald isn't real, he’s an imaginary character whom she created to have the father she never had. The people weren't real, they were all delusions, different personalities she created while she was asleep. Krogstad is herself when she falls into deception and greed, this version will do anything to succeed, even though it means cheating someone, this is her bad side, which is why she sees herself in Krogstad. Dr. Rank is herself when her in the future the one who’s dying and wants to die without regrets, this side will direct her differently and therefore altering her life in some ways to fulfill some memories. Ms. Linde reminds her of her normal self, the self who wasn't lucky and had to endure hardships in order to survive. The characters were a different version of herself, she was the only obstacle she faced in order to go find herself.

5 comments:

  1. HAHAHA!!! Nice one Ali. You went all out on this one!

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  2. this should of been the ending!

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  3. i commented on Jordan, kevin, paul, and tommy. also my ending is a reference to fight club

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  4. OMG! This is so good, at first I was confused (but laughing my butt off) then when I got towards the end I realized what happened. Good job.

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